That IS really sad. well, I also wrote a sad one on a mirror, and I think yours is better. great job! 5/5

I loved the whole poem, it's beautifully written, and I liked the message. Poems about mirrors are my favorites, and this is definately a good one.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Hey there summer this iz ur sister this is a nyce poem styll confuzzin but ir eally lyke it your expressing rself in a wierd but awsome and scary ya kno what i mean well luv ya much k33p it up ~~ashla boo~~

Wow, can you say powerful?
'Just your souped up lies"
the word souped was so different, it caught my attention.
"I see my eyes
That wont unwind
My hands
Rusty and dirty
My memory
All ripped up and old
My feel
Unable to move"
these are my favorite lines. they were so sad and exploding with emotion.
great job,
5;5