Very sad/haunting poem.

I thought it was great. Your flow was good, the rhymes didn't seem too forced. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Hey darl this was really like.. deep and powerful. like an intresting use of words and uve written it with such a unique way. its g0od as =) xx
love from
dora

I like this poem a lot..its madd kewl...i write a lot of dark poems too but not as good as these...i give you 5/5..
~`*&clovers;Kiki&clovers;*`~

Murder me not but please just stop this heart
every beat of it explodes my memory apart
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one word "WOW"

this poem absolutely Rox!!!
I mean, its so very sad and miserable...very greatly written and perfectly expressed!!!
I love the last two lines also...very harsh thou =(

Keep up the excellent work!
P.S just wanted to tell you that you still write more beautiful LOVE poems...I guess your love poems appeal to me much more than sad and dark poems. even thou they're very great. all of them actually =)
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Absolutely wonderful... as always, your poems are so deep and beautiful... they touch me and make me feel every emotion.....

5.5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Yeah it was awesome! I really admire you; I would be unable to write such a great dark poem! Well done! And you used such a huge range of words to express your thoughts. Cool! Anyway, keep it up! 5/5
Best wishes,

((...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...))

Thanks it's good to be back, I love this poem, infact since I have been back, Ive been mostly reading poems and this has to be my fav, just everything from the way you have worded it and the way it flows perfectly, great job def got my 5 vote, keep writing so I can keep reading. Take care hun sarahx

Wow i like this poem alot.....its amazing..very powerfull too.....5/5
also thanks for the sweet comment on my poem too :)

Wow nice work! i liked the details u used. gr8 poem all around! congrats on gettin h/m on my contest! 5/5

Very deep! Every single line of this poem came straight from your soul, which made it an extra ordinary poem. Once again, you really touched me with your poem. Keep them coming. And sorry for the late comment.

Love & Best Wishes
Michelle

Wonderful work, Nitin. It's been too long since i read your work. Very well done on this one.

I like the way the couplets stand out in meaning on their own and flow well with the rest of the poem.

truly outstanding.

good luck and peace
shobhana

DEar,
I loves you poem.SAdness 's in every word so Enormous. i hope u get thru it.

Love

Great poem! Very sad and emotional, dark in some kind of ways but absolutely amazing!

Beauty in the sorrow of the human existance.
few can truely speak of the pain without confusing words, and definitions, and voiding the entire meaning with one wrong word.
i see none of that here.
our existance floats on.

Gr8 work again. i appreciate ur work dear.
keep writing. and i will keep reading and enjoying them.

luv

Wow. I like it a lot. I had a lot of vision with reading it. I could see what I was reading. Very cool.
5/5
~Ash

Wow... i don't know what to say about this poem, the lines seemed almost 'haunting' if that makes sense.
It was so sad and seemed so hopeless.
But a brilliant write by you nontheless.
5/5
*Gem*

Wow! You are very talented!
murder me not but please just stop this heart
every beat of it explodes my memory apart
That really cut right to my heart. I feel this way so much. ~BRAVO~
Take Care Your Friend Cindy