Lost in darkness that consumes,
My soul a flower that never Blooms.
Will I make to tomorrow?
I'm just asking for a little happiness to borrow.
I guess I'll hang my head and hide,
Finally destroyed by your pride.

Thought I'd finish it for you. it was good tho.

This is really good.. definitely has alot of emotion in such a small poem. Great job on this! 5/5

Hey, i really like it, but its also very short! but at the same time, its got a lot of feeling in it. good job!!
thanks for the comment!
hannah