by **~Lucy~**
Wow that was amazing words cant really describe how i feel about this because i sort of felt the same emotions as the girl in your poem felt a deffeinet 5/5 off me hunni |
by Sabrina
Nice... liked it a lot :) 5/5 |
Wow.. that was so powerful and emotional. I really enjoyed reading it! I found a few little mistakes though. |
by Sarah
That was amazing! |
Amzing! I could feel the emotion! You are a great writer! Keep up the good work! |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so good yet so sad at the same time. |
That story were the girl died sumtimes i wish that girl was me:( thankx i luved the poem love mak |
Great poem-it kept my attention the whole way through-and I like how it tells a story 5/5 good write |
The poem wast terrific, i loved it. it meant alot to me n i bet to alot of others too. excellent! |
Wow, impressive.so many people feel tht way and hopefully none will take it tht far. gr8 poem and it gives people a lot to think of |
I liked this poem a lot. I know what it feels like to be that girl. And I do like how you end your poem. The one part in particular that I really found that caught my eye was the line that said, |
I like it too...its hella sad... |
Wow... amazing job, that definitely spoke to a lot of people. It's great that you used your talent to turn a sad story into a poem with a great message. 5/5.. awesome. |
Wow thats a really awsum poem!!! |
I think this is great, you're a really good writer and this poem will touch so many people. It has sure touched my heart. 5/5 keep up the good work.. xxLezxx |
by Golden 101
.... speechless...WOW!!!!!.....why give 5/5 when u can give 10/5...nice work. pce+ luv-later |
by tornsoul
I absolutely loved it...send me more! |
by Spitfire
I love ur poems and now i added u to my favs |
Simply amazing! I know how you feel. So many of my friends don't want to stay, but don't know the pain they leave behind. Thank you so much! |
Great poem i love it so much my best friend just commited sucide and my other best friend tried meany times then i tried but i will never do that again the pain is just to much knowing that your friend is gone forever and that nothing can bring them back your poem is well wirtten |