Excellet poem! so sad! almost made me cry!! i loved it. 5/5

xo kisses xo

I REALLY like this one...its really good

Aww...beautiful poem..keep it up

Holy crap!! that wuz freaking amazing!!! aghh!! so good!! i only wish i could write like u my poems suck!! o well...=[ 5/5 im givin u!!

I Freakin love this poem. no more words said...

Damn thats good!

WOW!!! wat an amazing poem!!!! and so well written!!! soo sad tho!! keep up the amazing work!!! 5/5

Wow. That is truly an inspirational piece of poetry. I think it will reach out to many people.

On a different note, have you tried publishing any of these, like in a poetry book or something?...i dont know if you can do that...but a friend of mine said if you were good enough (which i think you are), then you can try sending some of these to a publisher and see what they think...

Great job!

That was beautiful and so true unfortunately

I loved it! But I think thats because it made me think about all the times I've thought of commiting suicide. Maybe I'll rethink it. NOt sure.

Wow...this poem was spectacular....that girl feels like me...i can relate so much! I love this poem!

Hey i like ur poem alot it sad but cool at da same time!! well g2g take care!!! =]
-LiL mIsS nIcE gUrL!!!!

This made me all tearie eyed!! thats sad..makes me wonder what happend to the girl if she had such a good life.. 5/5 !props!

Your more than amazing...
this is amazing
i loveyou x

Wow that was rea;;y good keep up the brill work :) well done :) 5/5

This is really good,
I recently jus added a poem about suicide called
to late for sorry;

I really like this
an enjoyed the storey.
Maybe should of included more of why she wasnt happy.

Just simply amazing. You have such brilliant talent. The flow and rhymes were excellent. 5/5

That was a perfect heartbreaking poem. I loved it. It just brings in tears.
5/5