Still in love with you..

by Fredaeya   Jun 27, 2006


This is basically about a guy I'm in love with. I knew he used to like me but I'm not sure now. He's afraid of commitment so I know he'll never be 'mine'...if there is such a thing, so I've been going out with other guys I like to try and 'move on'. And I do like them, a lot, but I love him. And thats what this is about. So please vote and comment, it would mean a lot.
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The stars shine bright on a summers night,
Theres room on this couch for two,
The moon shall smile, but just for a while,
It frowns all because of you,
The sun wont awake; it cant stand the decisions you make,
And your not hear but I'm not alone,
The clouds, they wander, so this dilemma, they cant ponder,
They cant stand it so they run, they roam,
Hansel and Gretel got lost in the woods and little red ridding hood lost her cape and her hood,
All because they couldn't get their minds off of you,
Just like whenever I go to bed, and whenever I'm awake,
You seem to haunt me in all that I do,
Its like a thousand knifes smashing into my skull, but I'm immortal, I just feel the pain,
Its like finally learning to dance in bad weather, just as it ceases to rain,
I tried to move on, believe me I did, I even found someone new,
And don't get me wrong I do like him too,
But theres a problem.

I still LOVE you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by KrissY

    Oooh. . . ! That's all I can think to say. You seem to be writing and rhyming as this happens, and recording your thoughts too which gives it a complete feel. Excellent! And thanks for leaving a comment, it was much appreciated and I will continue to view you portfolio and leave comments. :D