Secret longing (another of my short ones)

by alan f   Jun 27, 2006


Ill fake a charming smile
for all of you to see
but if you look deep within
you will find the real me

a shy and sensitive child am I
who's secret longing is to die
I pray I go to sleep one day
and never wake ever again

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow amazing poem.. i lvoe ur poems. they r so great.. i like it.. i feel that wya tooo... ur so talented.. keep writing.. great job 5/5

    take care and stay strong
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    It flowed and rhymed really well until the last line. Again didn't really rhyme with die. It was really short, but overall good.

    "but if u look deep within"
    Maybe you could write out the word you?

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