Wow. That was sad! It was so good though!

There was one error in there though, but it's just a site error that you can fix by editing it. =)

I thought your choice of wording in this again was great, and everything flowed well together. A really great piece. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I agree with TaLeEe. Great flow, wording, and emotoinal inpact left in the reader. I'm just sort of left speachless here, not sure what else to say.

Love
Purple

One word: BRILLIANT!

Amazing
Something I can relate to.
Perfect as always
5/5
x

You really know how to put you feeling in to words and its always so hard hitting well done