by LadyPearl Jun 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Please read, it's a bit long--- |
by RetroRavey
That was very sad... Very sad indeed. I liked it, as i do all of your poems, and I don't think it was very long at all. I wrote a poem once that was six notbook pages long, front and back, but I'm crazy =D! Great job, again, 5/5. |
I really liked this one, it's sad, and so well written. I imagined everything in the poem, the girl, the family... |
by X~Angie~X
Very very sad.. :( it made me sad when i read it. its very deep and powerful.. but its good. u wrote it well. it has great rhythm.. word choice..adn flow.. great job.. keep writing |
by Bridgette
Aww.. that was really sad. I loved the story you had going on and the meaning behind it that money cannot buy happiness. Great poem, the wording was really good, with some great descriptions and it flowed well. Great job 5/5 |
by SaveMe?
Awww thats so sad ='[ |