Awww thats so sad ='[
very moving poem
that was a great write and you are an amazing poet!
i loved this story
5/5
keep up the good work
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

Awww thats so sad ='[
very moving poem
that was a great write and you are an amazing poet!
i loved this story
5/5
keep up the good work
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

Aww.. that was really sad. I loved the story you had going on and the meaning behind it that money cannot buy happiness. Great poem, the wording was really good, with some great descriptions and it flowed well. Great job 5/5

Very very sad.. :( it made me sad when i read it. its very deep and powerful.. but its good. u wrote it well. it has great rhythm.. word choice..adn flow.. great job.. keep writing
take care and stay strong
angie

I really liked this one, it's sad, and so well written. I imagined everything in the poem, the girl, the family...

This was my favorite part:

Into the sky, with her eyes closed tight
She lets go of her remaining life light
Fading...dying, her memories, her dreams
The night filled with her parent's scream

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

That was very sad... Very sad indeed. I liked it, as i do all of your poems, and I don't think it was very long at all. I wrote a poem once that was six notbook pages long, front and back, but I'm crazy =D! Great job, again, 5/5.

ravyn