Great poem very moving and powerful =]
i liked the last line =]
very well written
great wrok keep it up =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
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This has a good flow i like it

That was a very good 'alphabet' write. Actually, one of the best I've seen on this site. Not many people have the creative minds to write a poem like this, so kudos to you. It's so hard to write a poem when you have guide lines. I usually like poems to be free, but still, it's fun to try other stuff.

The flow in this poem was pretty good. It never seemed forced. Awesome stuff!

Really really creative. and very powerful. i digged the wya it was set out, and how every line meant soemthing. it rocked. well done.

Ha ha.
i like how you used the alphabet to write the poem
very creative
5/5
~Emma

Well done. It's always good to look foward instead of back. Not very many people live life that way.