+wow this poem is amazing
you put depression and what it is and can do so well into this poem and i liked the lastverse
very well written
5/5
lovelove
Alice
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Omg wow. i like it alot. i kno alot of ppl who have thot of suicide.. and i kinda thot about it.. but i never thot how it would effect the ppl around me since no one ever seems to notice ne thing.. but ne ways this is a great poem. i like it alot. it makes u think about how it would hurt the ppl around you.. great job keep it up
take care
angie

Wow very true nice point of view!! =)