Comments : Dark Pools That Seperate Us

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey i really liked this one, beautifully written.

    Please correct the spelling mistakes that occurs due to flaw in site.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this so much, and you said you weren't good, thats crazy, this is really good i loved the sotry and you used great descriptions of everything the last stanza was my favorite but i loved all the other ones too very good 5/5