From me right now your heart is sealed
[Is that meant to say 'for me'?]
Life is not a fairy tale
For my dreams will never come true
[I liked those lines, although alot of people write about fairtytales comparing to love. I still liked it though.]
You are not the princess that I must rescue
Or the queen protected by my castle walls
[I loved those lines! I thought they were different, and cool!]
This was a pretty good poem overall, I don't really see and rocky areas, It all flowed well. You've done a great job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Mmhhhhh...yummy.
I really really liked this one.
The last poem I commented had some critique about Rhyming, but this one's rhyme scheme is great;; I guess you've already improved, hehe.
The only thing I can really think of are those darn quotation marks-- I'd watch out for those, but that's just me.
"Imagination is our friendship
Impossibilities it seems
Childish stories of courtship
Our existence but a dream

Life is not a fairy tale
For my dreams will never come true
Though I try hard to prevail
For you, I too must join this queue"

^^these are my favorite lines.
Especially the "true" and "queue."
I've never even heard the word "queue" so today I'm learning something new!
Haha, that rhymes.
:)
woot.