by Sarah Ann Jun 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Words that sting my consciousness |
by Margarita
IT'S A GREAT POEM. |
This poem is so sweet and beautifully written. I loved the ending, and I can relate to the whole poem. I think my favorite part was the third stanza, I think you really described my situation in that part. |
Very nice poem. good use of words. and i especially loved the last para. keep it up. |
by Nelle
Wow, well i definitely loved this one..you are very talented, you really know how to bring our your feelings thru your words..and you do it very well!! 5/5 |
by katie
Hey girl that poem is down right awesome ok keep writting you great :) ~Kate~ |