Comments : In Dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I adore him and I love him
    But he exists only in dreams
    [Loved those lines!]
    I'm really starting to like your poems. They're all so good. You word them beautifuly. And this poem was great, no wait. More than great. I loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Awwww babe that was very fascinating and so beautiful
    I really adore your love poems you probably write them more perfectly than sad and other poems!
    I guess I never doubt liking these poems..maybe because I'm very emotional hehe XD

    now continue writing and plz try to hit me with more more fascinating love poems =D
    Love you Hun
    NemO xx0x0x0x0xx

  • 18 years ago

    by katie

    Hey girl that poem is down right awesome ok keep writting you great :) ~Kate~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Wow, well i definitely loved this one..you are very talented, you really know how to bring our your feelings thru your words..and you do it very well!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by arunima gautam

    Very nice poem. good use of words. and i especially loved the last para. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is so sweet and beautifully written. I loved the ending, and I can relate to the whole poem. I think my favorite part was the third stanza, I think you really described my situation in that part.

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Margarita

    IT'S A GREAT POEM.
    I really like it.