Depression Mode

by Danielle   Jun 27, 2006


Depression mode my skin feels low my heart feels low like its fallen to the floor below.
My breath grows so deep so deep.
Only small breaths of air can get in and out.
What is life all about, about?
I feel like I can\'t get out, get out.
My veins pulse faster with blood and my stomach feels full of mud, of mud.
My fingers shiver with cold love and I feel relief from above, above.
A single tear drips down my face and disappears without a trace.

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Great poem. i really like it.. its has alot of emotion put in it.. i like the flow and word choice.. its very good. keep writing.. 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Great little poem
    very moving and i liked the way on each line you repeated a word and on the last line you didnt
    very good writing =]
    greatwork keep it up =]
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxx