Sorry, but this poem really confused me.
with you where here
wanting to be there
I didn't really get that part.

Ah i donno i don`t really like this one. its kind of confusing, and hard to tell whats going on, try describeing the situation more?

I was a little confused but pretty good anyway

I really did not understand that.. lol maybe it's just me, b/c i dont udnerstand a lot! but really i didnt...but it was still good tho!!!

Well, I'M not comfused. I think you may have meant "doomed", but Idk. Other than that, I pretty much get it. It's one of those specific instances or feelings you write about, and it may not make much sense to other people. I write poems like that ALL THE TIME!! lol! I, for one, enjoyed it. 4/5 (since it doesn't make sense to others!!)!!