Cancer

This poem was so sad yet beautifully written.
love the way you have written it.

She kisses him lightly,
He touches the top of her head,
At the touch, she slowly remembers,
All the words she never said

She raises her chin,
As you can imagine is hard to do,
She says in her meek, soft voice,
"I just want you to know, I love you."

He looks at the monitor,
I love you too,
Her last breath was taken in front of him
At least she did what she had to do

this stanza brought tears to my eyes.
the imagery was perfect and the flow was good.
best wishes
take care
emmeline

This is soo sad but i like it!!! KEEP IT UP

Amazing! really well written. no getting away from the emotions in this poem! superb! x

That is so sad, I know how you feel, my aunt just died of cancer, it's a hard thing to deal with. So much emotion, this is extremely well written, keep up the good work! 5\5
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

I love this its really cute!!!