My little pessimist

by eveofcoleman   Jun 27, 2006


Lost in the dark you seem to be
How can you ever see what i see...
You wanna die..to be rid of the pain
But if u did we' be lost in the rain..

I tell you to be happy...but u cant..
I tell you to look at its brightside..
But you...you are my opposite...
For you everything has a bad end...
You dont know how to think happy..
My little pessimist ...my best friend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    Its sad but gud.if u eva need to talk im here! 5/5 keep writin!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short poem, but it was good. All I can sugest is capitalise your I's.

    But you u are my opposite..
    [I wasn't sure what that line meant?]

    Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by we_all_live_to_die

    Hmm i wonder who this is about XD hey i really liked it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    This is amazing. i can relate to it. i have always been told htat i should look at the brightside of things.. but i cant.. this is very good. keep writing 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    This is really good, and very true. i like it

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