This is really good, and very true. i like it

This is amazing. i can relate to it. i have always been told htat i should look at the brightside of things.. but i cant.. this is very good. keep writing 5/5
take care
angie

Hmm i wonder who this is about XD hey i really liked it 5/5

Short poem, but it was good. All I can sugest is capitalise your I's.

But you u are my opposite..
[I wasn't sure what that line meant?]

Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Its sad but gud.if u eva need to talk im here! 5/5 keep writin!