by LadyPearl Jun 27, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
"The Grand essentials of happiness are: something to do, something to love, and something to hope for."---Allan K. Chalmers |
by LadyPearl
It may or may not apply to you. THere ARE certain people on this site that are like that. I got some of those lines from what people have said. |
This is a really important message, though it is kind of harsh. But that's good too. Your poem is also so well written, I love it entirely. |
by Cierra
I love this poem! |
by Kaylee
There was a lot of truth in it but maybe a bit too much truth, as in you kept repeating try something new as if to drill it into their minds. "Open your mind and drop your knife Learn the responsiblity of living your life" The whole poem felt as if you were talking about just cutters but what about other people who should take some of this advice and not everyone who is sad is looking for just self pity. But I did like the fact that you pointed out that nobody is ever unloved. |
by Laura
Very original and it gives hope. You have conveyed a strong message through out this poem. The flowa was good and it was anice read. Jus for some lines it didn't rhyme but other than that it was totally awesome!! |