Well, very inspiring in a way..if someone is willing to open there heart and take that in, it would be inspiring..it was a great poem! it had a real valuable point to it! keep it up 5/5

Open your mind and drop your knife
Learn the responsiblity of living your life
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Loved those lines!
This poem was wow. Honestly, It was more then wow!
There's so much truth in it. And you explained and expressed everything so clearly and well. You've blown me away. Seriously! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Very original and it gives hope. You have conveyed a strong message through out this poem. The flowa was good and it was anice read. Jus for some lines it didn't rhyme but other than that it was totally awesome!!
5/5

There was a lot of truth in it but maybe a bit too much truth, as in you kept repeating try something new as if to drill it into their minds. "Open your mind and drop your knife Learn the responsiblity of living your life" The whole poem felt as if you were talking about just cutters but what about other people who should take some of this advice and not everyone who is sad is looking for just self pity. But I did like the fact that you pointed out that nobody is ever unloved.

I love this poem!

This is a really important message, though it is kind of harsh. But that's good too. Your poem is also so well written, I love it entirely.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

It may or may not apply to you. THere ARE certain people on this site that are like that. I got some of those lines from what people have said.
Some people think that nobody loves them.
-a person did say they cut because they're bored, that's why I wrote, get active and stuff

-Real depressed people on medications, I can understand