Wow, this is sooo good. Just gave me chills literally. I love love love how you went through what the kids could've become. People don't realise that babies are people.. even before they're born. They think, they feel.

Very strong and well expressed message. i cant say im sure i agree but i do think its important for everyone to have their opinions on such matters, and this is written very well.

-biscuit-

At least u dnt suck any more, thax for commenting, bye.

At least u dnt suck any more, thax for commenting, bye.

Its sad, but that is mostly true. Nice job. I think about the points you made in that poem quite often and it makes me kind of mad. 5/5 overall. Keep it up.
The flow was good and the meaning was powerful. Keep it up.

Wow. I'm amazed! Just amazed how you can write this so perfectly and have such a great imagination for it! 5/5