Wow, twas a v.good poem. I [heart] it so much. V deep n just plain awesome.
Luff ya hunny.
-Becca.x

Omg all i can say is amazing...i can really realate unfortunatly it's kind of a sad poem i think i might try to make one with a friend of mine it sounds like fun but this was like i said amazing 5/5 =)

Wow, this poem touched me alot.

Wooow Nelle! Excellent. 5/5
XxXCassieXxX

Thats was Super GOOD...
it came up the right moment..
i had tears in my eyes....it's so good...

I love this poem, the thoughts and feelings you described are very important, and I think many can relate to them. I always ask myself those questions (the ones in the second stanza).

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Again ladies excellent write!! That first stanza really pulled me in because I find those questions the same ones I ask myself about certain people and it hurts sometimes to not know if one you love will be in heaven or hell :(

Lovely write and kinda sad!!! Loveing your work you two!
-Krissey

5/5.. Nice.. Great poem.. Kinda freaky but oh well u need freakyness in poems to get it out.. lol 5/5

~4ever

What would I do what would I say
What would be the story of the dead body that lay
What could I do when you are gone
Too many thoughts drive me to wrong.

I loved that part, especially the last line. but I loved the poem all together, great job.
--Steph

Omfg i love it!! this is really goood. its sad, but wow its amazing. you defiantly have talent, so dont ever stop writing. and suicide is not the answer, just hang on. if you need to talk i'm here for you. keep writing 5/5