Havant we all had da same feelings u speak of in ur poem. i went ova ur poem 4 times n when i did it reminded me of some good memories dat waznt there b4, good job n thanks.

My favorite part of the poem was, "I hear you say, "I promise, this will all get better...". When the last line is added What do you say, beautiful, what do you say? A very strong message is given. I realy enjoyed the poem for it spoke a message to me.