This poem was actually pretty well written considering it's probably the point of view of a lot of americans now. I really liked how you poointed out how some attitudes have change against middle eastern people because unfortuantely that is becoming a known fact as bad as it is.

That was good. I despise Bush with a firey passion, and a wrote a poem like that, but mine was FAR less civilized. A nice way to put your feeling through nicely... 5/5

Ravyn

HOORAY, FINALLY SOMEONE WHO SHARES WHAT THE WHOLE WORLD IS THINKING. I COMMEND YOU FOR YOUR HONESTY. I WROTE ONE FOR A POETRY CHALLENGE FROM THE EYES OF BARBARA BUSH AS SHE TALKS TO HER SON. NOT AS WELL DONE AS THIS THOUGH. BRAVO.

I'm not much into politics but this is a very intersting letter, to honestly say i'm on both sides, i'm for the war and against it. but i'm not in here to argue, newayz great poem it had some emotion and how frustrating this debate can become. nicely done 5/5

Haha, really good poem. The reason I laughed, was because I wrote a poem like this a while ago. Not this long or detailed, but the same concept. Check it out, it's called "The Error in Terrorism". Really good poem, and it does make a lot of sense.

WEll Said, Bout Time Someone Said It, I agree 110%..I llove this poem..omg how cool would it be if Mr.Bush Read it..Contreversy to the max init..anyway..good one hunni..keep it up your a pro poet

-angel-

Ok. we all have our opinions. but seriously., why blame bush? 9/11 could not have been prevented. so we went to war to check for weapons right? we didnt find any. so you say "pull our tropps out then if theres none!"

Sorry but you cant "pull out" in the middle of a war, especially when you have other countries helping you.

By the way, america didnt get its freedom but sitting on our asses.

we had to fight for it. so i'd like to see any of you guys get off your butts and go be a better president.

Stop blaming the president for everything, we're the people, we make our own actions and you blaming the president isnt going to help that any.

I'm an Australian that hears many things about Mr Bush and I am totally on the opposing side. I know for a fact that the things I hear are true and it makes me sick that he thinks only for his benifit, not the country he is supposedly committed to protecting and organising. I like your point cookiedough and i respect everyones opinions, its just a shame that America's president cannot. Im not entirely sure how America's politic system works but I understand the things Mr Bush is doing and has done are wrong and threatning to America's people. Australia may be in soe kind of alliance with America which i both stand for and see the negatives in. I stand for the alliance to help the innocent of America, and I am sadly against some of the aspects because just maybe one day Mr Howard will hand everything we have over to Mr Bush.
I shall leave it there.. I take cnstructive critisism so feel free to express your opinion on my statements.
with respect and hope....xAbbyx

Very well writtin....5/5 for the different aspects...
xx

I know you said you werent trying to offend anyone, and you didnt offend me, you just made false facts. again, you didnt offend me. you said tha tno one likes him, and i do.

you cant blame Bush for 9/11. you cant blame him for starting a war. what did you want us to do, lie on our backs like dogs?

PEOPLE JOIN THE ARMY FOR 2 REASONS:
1: DIE FOR THIER COUNTRY
2: GET MONEY

if they died for cause number 1, i say goodjob. and he is happy.
if he died for cause number2, i say good ridence.

just a thought provoker...

I really liked this poem.. its so true. I am not an american thanx god but I dont understand how he can possibly send all of thoes innocent people over to fight in a country that did nothing wrong in the first place (it was another country responsible for 9/11) anyway I understand that in posting this I am going to make a lot of people mad and disagree with what I say.. but that doesnt matter.. what does matter is I think this poem was wonderfully written and expressed what a lot of people feel. SEND THE TROOPS HOME!

I love it and agree w/ u ur an awsom poet

Wow u cant really be n the midle w this 1 can u?! well i luv it and to all u republicans w/ ur eyes sewn shut, how about u sew ur mouth shut 2! im glad sum1 finally had the balls 2 say sumthin like this. my entire family is military and i plan on goin 2 but this war is pointless. i luv what u said about a hand full turnin 2 them all. BRING OUR TROOPS HOME!