Left Alone As A Suicidal Freak

by SaveMe?   Jun 27, 2006


Left alone
As a suicidal freak
No I don//t think you care
The future nowâ?¦so bleak

Wasting away
These worthless days
With tears and screams
And Razorblades

Lost in a world
Far from her own
A sweet smile disappeared
Never answers the phone

Cant help but cry
As the stone in her throat
Sinks deeper and deeper
Like a wreck of a boat

Caught in the fire
Torment and rain
Looks at her friend
So fake and vain

Blundering through life
As you would a forest at night
Looking for arms of blood
All I see are scars of white

Calling out in the fog
And the gloom
The secrets and problems
Beginning to bloom

Staring across the lake
And into the sky
Can//t see from the clouds
No happiness in my eye

I search deep down
For hope within
For happiness
Which goes deeper than skin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Hey, i loved this poem you really captured the mind of someone who's been depressed, great job. I loved the ending and i hope you do fine happiness, i know its hard, but you can do it. Great Job 5/5.

    --Steph

    P.s. Thanks for the comment and the title for my poem:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bronte

    Alice This is a very touching poem. I know how you feel I went through a time like this as well and still am to a certain extent, keep strong and keep writing you're so talented!

    Xox ~Bronte

  • 18 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    That is very soulful mydear. I really enjoyed it, and it was very moving. I hope all is well with you. Please comment back, it would mean the world. I would love some feedback on Red Raindrops and Baby, never let her go. thanks. xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Yeah. Alice.
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Tis a good poem
    But sad
    Wish I could write as well as you
    5/5

    thanks for the comment

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