Yo, dats beautiful, it relates 2 my past so much. did dat cum from da heart?

Mmm i definatly love this, and i find myself in such the same place, its quiet funny, but its just that longing for the connection and the bond, not just another bullshit relationships that will be over in a month, but that connection that just brings you to life.

Nice words u have used, and in good sequence :)

Ive been following ur poems for a while now n i lile this 1 da best out of all da 1s ive read so far. thank u 4 putting ur words on paper so i can enjoy them.

Wow,,,REAL TRUE,,,,nice work smile,,,,,i could really relate to this right here,,,
keep it up

Its an excellent one girl! keep up the good work. and don't get insecure because everybody will honestly tell you when you are wrong, you just need to be strong enough to handle the critique. anyway, this poem is brilliant because it made me relate! good work. and please comment on mine too.

Wow very well written

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Good poem.

Nice poem!!! it's really good, i would like to read more of em so keep them coming!! please comment or vote on my poems too, thanx