Lol it didnt suck, and ur welcome. i loved it. i kno wat its like 2 just wanna let sumthin out, and actually it usually ends up being pretti good. urs is a perfect example. i wood get rid of the space at the bottom though. bsides that. 5/5!

It was good ^.^ and everyone needs to let something out... i mean you don't see mostly happy poems from me, i like to show my pain. many ppl don't get to see it in person.

It didnt suck...

It's good to let it out, the truth in poems is what its all about

good work.