Suicide Today

by Quinn Specht   Jun 27, 2006


Today I committed Suicide,
I looked to the darkest parts of outside.
The knife raced across my veins,
letting the blood bubble to the top.
My eyes soar from crying,
I had quit trying.
My mind empty
and my heart burdened with hurt.
Today I committed suicide,
and my last words were,
"I'm so very sorry."
You will never see my face again.
My last breath only moments ago.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Lewin

    The last line kinda clashed... but other than that the poem was great. I liked it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow that is sad:( dont kill urself... thats not a good idea.. there r ppl out there who will miss you so much..
    this poem is very good hto.. i like it alot.. it has alot of emotion in it.. i can also relate to it.. great job keep writing
    5/5
    take care and stay strong
    angie

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