Wow that is sad:( dont kill urself... thats not a good idea.. there r ppl out there who will miss you so much..
this poem is very good hto.. i like it alot.. it has alot of emotion in it.. i can also relate to it.. great job keep writing
5/5
take care and stay strong
angie

The last line kinda clashed... but other than that the poem was great. I liked it. 5/5

Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!