Look upon the scars, burns, and tainted memories,
Understanding they're the past, and I can be alright
[Loved those lines!]
This was a really really good poem! Your choice of wording was fantastic! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Ok, i will be honest..I can not really comment on your poems, b/c i dont really understand them! I'm just an idiot and dont understand many things lol so most of your words i have never seen before in my life...but from what i do understand it was a great poem!!!

Aww! I loved this poem!!!!! I can really relate with how you said that you were seeing the blackness and thought you were going to fall into it, but then you fought it and made it through! I love how your words flowed and I only wish I could write like you! Great job, and hang in there! Much love to you!

Eleesa, this poem was very very deep!! I had my own view of this, and my own message. That is one thing that is great about your poetry, you write one thing down, and so many people interpret it differently, and everyone is able to understand. It's like a universal language. Amazing stuff!