by Wasted Fake Smiles Jun 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Hello darling, come over here to me, |
by holly
Congratulations on coming second in my contest :D |
Nice rhyming scheme i like it alot. thank you for sharing it with us. it gets a 5 from me. and thanks for your kind comments on my own poems. |
This is such a sweet poem, I love it. It's well written and sincere. Every line is original and kept my attention. |
by Ty Jones
That's a tough situation to be in. Good Job 5/5. |