You know, the rhyme scheme is really good, and although I could read along without problem, if you put it in stanzas, the reader would be able to follow the poem alot better. Still yet, I'll give you a 5.

Wow this is a great poem..it also explains how i feel....your really good.....oh yes and thank you for the comment on my poem destiny....i am glad to know that there is other ppl who know how i feel...i thought i was stupid and the only one to be in love online...but yeah thank you