Standing in the Rain

by LaurenLiz   Jun 28, 2006


I stand in the rain
To let it blend with my tears
I feel all the pain
That creates all my fears
I try to let it wash away
But it is stuck inside me
I do not want it to stay
And I do not want anyone to see
All the tears I am crying
Once the rain will stop
I am going to end up dying
Before I can make it to the top
Only a few more times
Until I cannot hold on
No more I can climb
Because it has been way to long
It will have to eventually end
Because from life I am slipping away
Unless a miracle someone can send
I cannot even stay just another day

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Hey lauren, this is another amazing poem.. i have read alot of ur poems adn i love them. they have so much meaning to them.. they have a lot of emotion put in them. i can relate to them. thanx for the comment u left me. it means alot. yea i am goin thru a tuff time too. im struggling with being happy.. if u kno wut i mean.. i jus cant seem to find a reason to be happy and stuff... but ne ways if u ever want to talk i am here. u can email me. i will always be here... keep writing ... u r so talented.. i love ur poems.. great job 5/5
    take care and stay strong
    luve angie

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