by SilenceBreaksTheHeart Jun 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No matter how hard I try |
Hun only God can take ur pain away! Give Jesus ur heart and u will be free. take it from a girl that's went through A LOT of pain! -erica |
by xxmichaelxx
A++++++++++!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you're really a good poet! SPEECHLESS!!! he he |
by DreamAwish
I really loved ur poem.. u made me feel the same thing ..took me to ur moments :) .. loved it .. |
This was beautiful in a strange way. I really thought that this was something rather...great for vividness. I thought that the third stanza had been good yet not exactly as strong as the other ones. The first stanza had been really cool. Loved just the words and well the overall thing. |
I loved ur poem soooo much its so well written and i can relate to it...i wish i could write poems like you!! excelent work (and thanks for commenting on mine) |