This is a sad but beautiful poem at the same time....well writtin...keep up the good work.. 5/5

That's beautiful hun, yu and yu're sis have a great talent, if yr sis ever gets an account please tell me I'd love to read more of her work :)

Love
Xx-me-xX

Wow this is great thanx 4 the comments u left i=on my poems i appreciate them good luck for the future because you are a very talented writter.. Keep it up..

You write so well! Please keep on writing. Your poetry really inspires me.

Wonderful...the only thing that bothers me is that the third stanza is a bit different from the others. It's out of rhyme scheme and the number of lines are different. It doesn't take away from the message and strength of the poem however, so great job!

5/5

joy*:.xx

I loved ur poem soooo much its so well written and i can relate to it...i wish i could write poems like you!! excelent work (and thanks for commenting on mine)
Luv DarkCookie

This was beautiful in a strange way. I really thought that this was something rather...great for vividness. I thought that the third stanza had been good yet not exactly as strong as the other ones. The first stanza had been really cool. Loved just the words and well the overall thing.
~Faith-less

I really loved ur poem.. u made me feel the same thing ..took me to ur moments :) .. loved it ..
excellent

A++++++++++!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you're really a good poet! SPEECHLESS!!! he he

Adrian ('',)

Hun only God can take ur pain away! Give Jesus ur heart and u will be free. take it from a girl that's went through A LOT of pain! -erica