Comments : Jealousy

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Nice poem, I liked how you wrote about this and described it as a green monster!
    Cool how you asked a question first:

    "What is this after me?
    A green monster that I see"

    "Pointy ears, and glowing, green, eyes,
    With sharp nails and long, long, cries."

    Nice how it all rhymed and you were so descriptive in saying what it looked like. Really enjoyed this, thought it was awesome!

  • 14 years ago

    by Emilina

    Very good