The Beatiful Life Of The Razor...

by Frenesiia   Jun 28, 2006


Slowly dieing of the pain inside
B.c everyday i have to hide
You said u love me but its all lies
Im slowly dieing without any pride

U say that ur there but i dont see it
And thats when i start to slit
Every night and Every day
You c me cry but all u do is ask am i okay

No im not b.c of all ur b.s
Its never gonna stop im never gonna quit
No one loves me and i call see it in ur eyes
You all or just in disguise

But im not turnin back now
Because thats something that i allow
Im me and im never gonna stop
Im do this till the day i drop

So dont say ur sorry cuz sorry didnt do it
This is something worth a commit
Ive moved on to something true
And its not you

Ive found my very best friend
Who will always bee with me till the end
He was there when i had no one
He talks to me and makes me feel so good

So ive moved on and i love it
Buy next year i will quit
But only b/c im dead
And i want u to no ur the one who led
Me to this beautiful life of the razor.........

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  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Not too keen on the use of poor English, poetry will not be taken seriously unless it is written seriously!
    Emotional write, and moving. Not bad for a teen angst poem, but the spelling lets it down.

  • 18 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    One thing that you need to do, is write what you mean! Not like b/c write because.. It gets really confusing and I am sure more ppl would give the time to look at your poem.. That is the only problem i had about putting you first in my contest..

    Rach

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