by Raychil Jun 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
There once was a woman |
by Chelsey
Oh...My...Gawsh!!!! Raych! WOW!! I don't normally say this to people so you need to feel real special, but this is my favorite poem! I mean I've never said that..this is my favorite!! THis was amazing, the story was awesome, your structure continued to flow through the whole poem, I mean wow wow wow is all i can say...what a creative lil mind you have I am totally jealous I did not think of this idea! I'm not sure what to say other then this is a fave!!!! I'm gunna go read it again |
by sarah
What a fantastic poem, very emotional piece of work, you def got my 5 vote, Keep writing an I will keep reading, take care hun Sarah x |
That was one strange extremely cool poem. The whole story concept was nice. The thing with the letter and rose was in fact well done. Really, really good. It had a nice flow and some words that went well with it. |
Great poem- I loved how it told a story-the poem flowed nicely and definately kept my attention! The only thing I found that you might want to change is: |