Great poem- I loved how it told a story-the poem flowed nicely and definately kept my attention! The only thing I found that you might want to change is:

"And saw to cars that had crashed"
The "to" should be "two"
Its not really a big deal but I thought I'd mention it anyway.

5/5 on the poem-I really enjoyed it

That was one strange extremely cool poem. The whole story concept was nice. The thing with the letter and rose was in fact well done. Really, really good. It had a nice flow and some words that went well with it.
~Faith

What a fantastic poem, very emotional piece of work, you def got my 5 vote, Keep writing an I will keep reading, take care hun Sarah x

Oh...My...Gawsh!!!! Raych! WOW!! I don't normally say this to people so you need to feel real special, but this is my favorite poem! I mean I've never said that..this is my favorite!! THis was amazing, the story was awesome, your structure continued to flow through the whole poem, I mean wow wow wow is all i can say...what a creative lil mind you have I am totally jealous I did not think of this idea! I'm not sure what to say other then this is a fave!!!! I'm gunna go read it again
-Chels