Awwwwwwwwwwwww i loved it, i am completely speecheless tho...it really touched me, it shows a great deal of emotion, and is very inspiring, it's a perfect piece..you did great..deifnitely 5/5

Everything in your poem is so true, but I guess there will always be good and bad in the world. I liked the whole idea of the poem, it's not soft but not harsh.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Wow.. that really touched me. I feel the same way. The world needs to look to God. It had so much emotion in it. The flow was good. The rhyming was off a bit, but it was still a very good poem. Great job!

Good poem.... great job.
Ravyn

Woah. this was really good! thnx for the r/c for me! anyway, i really like the details in this. its totally true. i hate what this world is comming to. it has great wording that make you think. i loved it 5/5

This is so good and I'm glad you are speaking up and you love the Lord! He is amazing.

This poem moved me to tears really and I added you as one of my favorites. Keep writing!

If you would ever just like to talk about the Lord, you can tell me and e-mail me if you like. I don't have too many friends who love the Lord...

p.s. thank you for your comment on my sheperd poem.

Awesome! This is really good! I really liked it1

Awww. i really liked this poem. it is so so so so...so true. i agree with you guy. totally. 5/5...no.100 out of 5. great job!

thanx for reading my poem too. i really appreciate it!

~chelsea~

Awww. i really liked this poem. it is so so so so...so true. i agree with you guy. totally. 5/5...no.100 out of 5. great job!

thanx for reading my poem too. i really appreciate it!

~chelsea~

You r indeed chaging this world, firstly, by realizing the misery of the world.secondly, by posting a poem so strong and speaking loudly thru it.Excellent Job.
God bless your pen and souls

This is a great poem and I agree 100%! This world is filled with to many negitive influences, and I think it needs to stop!
*~`Stephanie`~*
P.S.
Thanks 4 the comment and vote. 8}

Alright... u 2 r amazing poets, and I love the messages you guys give out! Your poems about God are so amazing, and honestly so life changing! and they rhyme and flow so beautifully I'm always speechless! I applaud you both for your amazing poems and messages and standing up for what you believe!!! u guys earned 5s across the walls!

~+Megan+~

This was a really strong poem. Its obivious that you two are really strong writers with really strong convictions. I say excellent and only have one correction. Throne istead of thrown.

Your poem was really good. really hit home. iam glad 2 c someone taking a stand so publicly. puts me 2 shame. once again great poem! keep it up!

Krissy, I love this poem! It's overall structure descibes the strugles between a person's mortal life and the fight for those who should keep religious valves, but have forgot that in this day in age, god is needed more than ever. I look forward to reading more of your work. P.S. thanks for reading my work. I appreciate any and all comments you would like to send me. I'll be posting new work soon.

Great poem, I really liked it

Another great poem,5/5

It is so good to see two young girls have such high moral standards . I work with teens and sad to say many of them have an anything goes attitude. I would only make one minor change. The last line of the tenth stanza, I think should read WE not you, I know you didn`t mean it to sound that way. very good poem!

Excellent poem.

Heyy, I really like this poem. It really is the way the world is today but some few christians still stay faithfull to the church and to God. Thank you for writing this and inspiring me to continue following God. =]