Aww,that was really sweeeet!I loved the last 4 lines, they were very beautiful indeed.Anyway keep writing like that!
xx

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Wow again another great poem wow two thumbs up :) ~Kate~

David, you're such an awesome poet

Good vocab, David. You're really that smart? Lol, of course you are! It's such a sweet poem. Aww, I like. 5/5 (no surprise there)

Love Always
~Casey J

Awww this is so sweet 5/5