The Perfect Angel

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 28, 2006


As I look in your precious eyes
I see a girl who's waited for the right one
And staring back is me waiting for you
I can faintly hear you sing our loving song

This pounding heart is screaming for your name
It's singing for your love to finally reach here
It seems my wait has been for an eternity
Because it is you I have loved ever since

My veins pound as you slowly kiss me
My mind accelerates as you show your love
My eyes see heaven as you stare at me
My ears are at bliss as you slowly speak

Unexpectedly the mystery leaves
And chemistry has been replaced
My heart has refused, and is now accepting
I feel you're the right one

The lonely road that has been tread to get here
Will be accompanied with the perfect angel
Your name pounds in my body as I breathe
I see us forever standing by each others side

It's so finally clear to me in my life
I can't believe how I didn't see it before
The love in my heart has been unlocked
These endless nights will be filled with your arms

PLZ Vote and Comment!!

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I see a girl who's waited for the right one
    And staring back is me waiting for you
    ^^ I loved those lines. It is filled with so much love and adoration. The flow and rhtyhm of this was really good. You had amazing word choice in this. You portrayed your emotions very beautifully. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awww this is amazing, Travis! THis is how I feel for the one I love, thus it holds much meaning... The girl you have is very lucky. Take care.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
    Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job, loved the 3rd stanza

  • 18 years ago

    by chay

    I like!!!!!
    chay