God I'm Quietly Dying...

by Keep it simple stupid!!   Jun 28, 2006


I use to thought you understand me...
I use to think your one that sees me...
I thought all those promises were said so truly...
Till one day i found you sleeping..
and right beside was my boyfriend smiling....
why would you be with him naked...
why do i hear my mind set falling...
...i ran back home and find mom leaving...
saying dad has broken there promise and theres no thought for staying...
why would things happen so fast...
why do i find my tears start falling...
...Thought that God knows what his doing....
But i guess God make mistakes....
Cause i'm quietly dying....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good poem. It was sad.
    'I use to thought you understand me...'
    thought should be think
    '...Thought that God knows what his doing....'
    his should be He's or He is
    Just a few suggestions. Great write, by the way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Margarita

    Very good poem but in the first line
    " I use to thought"
    I think it should be I used to think
    and where it says "dad has broken there"
    I thik it should say "dad has broken their"
    but otherwise its a great poem.
    You put a lot of feeling into it,
    great job.

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