Very good poem but in the first line
" I use to thought"
I think it should be I used to think
and where it says "dad has broken there"
I thik it should say "dad has broken their"
but otherwise its a great poem.
You put a lot of feeling into it,
great job.

Good poem. It was sad.
'I use to thought you understand me...'
thought should be think
'...Thought that God knows what his doing....'
his should be He's or He is
Just a few suggestions. Great write, by the way.