Amazing. one of the best poems i have read for some time. i loved it.

Moonlit dancers swaying,
Sticking from the sea,
You cannot have the future,
If the past is what you flee.

this is my favorite stanza. well done emma, this is breath taking

Ruby

Oh Wow!! this one is really very touchy, could feel the sadness and an urge to compliment you for the selection of words, beautiful piece indeed.

all the best and take care
5/5

Wow! this is amazing. i can't believe more people havent rated! I love every word, every line and every stanza! But this one jsut stuck in my mind!

I wiped the sadness from my face,
And defied my chance to break,
Flames licking at my skin,
I burnt upon the stake,

it was great bravo!

The words were what really caught my attention. The images then were the next thing. Nice write. Though not really something I was really interested in it did have this pull of attention that made you realize that you had to read this. Cool job.
~Faith

Very pretty