by Whitey Jun 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every corner not turned, every path not taken, |
by Deana
I agree with all of the above, I love the emotion in the last line ,great job. |
You have such a powerful way with words. Can't wait to read more of your poetry. Keep it up. |
I really liked this one as well. It had a deeper meaning and I liked that. And then ending really did wrap it up quite well. Keep it up. 5/5 =]] |