I love your poem, I so know where your coming from with this one, cant wait to read more 5/5

Brilliant poem! It is short but still manages to convey a lot of feeling. I think that the 3rd verse is the best...
These are my acid tears.
Burning in my wounds,
This is the sound of my sobbing,
A soft melancholic tune,
magic!!
5/5 definitely! Such a strong, well-written and emotive poem.
If you have time please r/r/c one of my poems
Imi
xXx

Wow. alot of powerful words! i loved it great job. looking forward to seeing more.

Amberinaa*

It was a great poem, i love the way you used your words, some parts flowed evenly and some really didnt, but that is ok...b/c it's still an awesome poem! 5/5

Beautiful! I loved it! Your use of words was great. The flow to the poem was good. The poem was short, but for some reason I prefer short poems. I enjoyed it! Great job!

This is a very beautifully written poem. I love the line "I save you from myself" I've never thought of something like that before, and really made me think. I love this poem, it really gives me inspiration to let go of my ex. Great job on this. And I wish you all the best! You're an amazing poet and will go far with it. Just keep writing, stay strong, and always keep your head high! 5/5